Realize: Fact and Fiction. - Reviews

Jack: "Meaty, Cheesy, Salty, Sweet I want to Eat!"

      After a month, he rushed to my house one afternoon when he ought to be in the office with a cheering news that the team of doctors in that special hospital had agreed to tackle my case

"Nah it's fine come in I just gotta get dressed."

HP: 10

The sound of a doorbell ring made me jump in fright. I looked in the direction of the room that Sherman walked into. it looked like he didn't hear. This was my chance. Whoever it was, all I had to do was tell them I was kidnapped so they would call the police and then I'd dash out of here. If I had to run down 102 floors, I would.

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

"Yeah go take a rest, dont push your self Fritz."

Quite interesting to be honest. I don't really have anything to complain about except some few typos and grammatical errors here and there, but hey... it didn't ruin the immersion for me so it's fine. Besides, I like where the story is going as of the latest chapter.

please continue the chapters, i like your story! ♥️