Re: Magus

Insos

I dont really like the plot of system functions.  Giving powers randomly to anyone  will only create caos  in the world!!

is this the webnovel version?

Its a good read so far but a couple minor annoyances i have:
1. The author sabotages her own plot by creating woman who are interested in the protagonist's husbands. I mean, wasn't the whole reason they bought a shared wife because no girl would want to marry them due to them being poor and thus terrible husband candidates???
2. How quickly they all fell in love with her, there was no real development, they were just instantly smitten. Likewise she was instantly interested in them. The only person she had to develop a relationship with was Mo.
That said, its nice to see some reverse harems on this site that is mostly dominated by men who think its okay for a man to have multiple wives, but not okay for a woman to have multiple husbands, yet can't manage to see the contradiction.

this is a good story, but confused me in certain part
I wonder how Serena lost her baby. In what months of pregnancy was it? or by the time the baby was born? and it seems there wasn't the body. But Serena is a doctor herself. or wasn't she when the Incident happen..

Nice opening, great book.