The story is pretty good, I like it. The main character is great, he is willing to help others even though his condition is bad. That's a good first impression.
almost zero world explaining, just feels rushed . the writing is horrible on god I can't read this without spitting out mouthful of blood every couple sentences too hard to read just feels like mtl I have read only 5 chapters and I still don't understand where he is at or how he got there skips way too much detail.....
I smiled as I found myself already on the stairs leading out to the parking lot. My simple red bike already ready to be taken. I placed it close to where my locker was, I knew Armando would try one last time to hurt me.
