Poems/Short Stories - Reviews

Zara looked up from her own cultivation. She watched her teacher's weapon cultivation with rapt attention.

Author: so ends the story of Kaiser???

level : 91

Please don't just read and skip.  Leave an encouraging comment to me please!

honestly , everything about this story is like a poorly written CN . taking 3 chapters to describe the beauty of the Mc's Mom , writing about a 10 year old girl lusting over the mc just because of his talent and The MC being able to spot hostile intent that powerhouses much stronger than him can't perceive ? yeah this story is trash.

The pacing of the story has been written well and it's not lacking intensity with every chapter either with the fighting or twist in the plot of the story. It's a good book with an interesting concept that differentiates it from the rest of its kind of genre. Keep working on this book, author.

masih pertama kali baca untuk selesaikan tugas FP

okey ...like this is very bad... it feels like every third paragraph is missing with some information the story is developing very fast, again smt to do with the missing info