First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics:Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus.Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice. Keep up the good work with that.Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it.World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho
