Perfect

The story and characters have potential but the plot and characters are everywhere. It’s a little hard to follow and goes form slow pace to fast to slow. It jumps around a lot and seems to lack consistency. Also needs a trigger warning

I hesitated before I spoke. I had never said it aloud, but I thought if I had to voice my fears, I may as well tell them to Julian, since we had promised to be honest. "I think with each repeat, more of my memories seem to fade. They were small things, at first, like an old childhood friend's last name or lines from my favorite movie. But now I seem to have forgotten entire events."

If the company likes the idea then they will buy it and as a compensation they will  give some shares or anything that is worthy of that idea .This amount will go to our main account of our  company from there we will distribute it to the people who gave us idea depending upon their contribution.