Origin Bloodline - Reviews

"Pfft, the ball headed man, but as you can see I"m stronger than you guy so this is your last warning, retreat or die here like a retarded man"

while not many chapters are out, the plot seems interesting, will definitely keep reading this

review for FP....the Poster seems interesting tho....nice choice !!

after a long time finally some good light novel ? good work

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I read up to chapter 30 and enjoyed everything about it and MC's power is exactly my taste. But I have a problem with MC's character. He's too kind. I want an MC who will kill everyone if there's even the slightest disrespect to himself and his wife. I mean everyone, not just the character in question but his entire family. I feel like Adui is having trouble with this. I hope he can write a main character like that for this. Everything else is great.

I'm joining the traditional 10 chapter!!  thank you for supporting me as this is quite important for me, this is my first time writing my own book so expect that it's gonna be a bumpy ride!.you can support me by adding this to your library if you can, when I'm around chapter 40 I'll get premium chapters and should I try making it shorter or longer? since if i can I'll set it to 4coins per chapter as I'm only doing it as a sideline (extra money) to help my mother for my tuition fee, anyway thank you for supporting me and being with me as we embark in this journey!!