I can say that the synopsis hooked me from the start, but I find it lengthy to read, so it needs to be divided into paragraphs. In that way, readers would have the 'feel' for it. Now for the novel's content, there are a few grammar mistakes in the dialogues, but the story development makes up for that. I love a good contemporary romance especially when the author gives a spice into it like it's not a typical trope. Keep it up, author-nim!