One piece : Demon - Reviews

The walk to school is easy enough. All she has to do is keep her head down and nod if anyone greets her. She doesn't talk to anyone, doesn't worry about them finding out she's dead because she's moving past them before they even notice her.

「nchu...!?　Chu, juu, chupu...kuchu, amu, n, jupi, chururu, koku, koku, rechu...♡」

Dysta had been living in the slums of this city that looked so shiny, in the darkest corners where just getting by was so bad that parents wouldn't hesitate to sell their children for a piece of bread no matter how stale it was.

Xiao hong woke up in the morning and washed his face and gone to the mandrak lust frost

I’m really enjoying this and if need be if you need help making this book/comic come chat with me I know some ways to make this a good story but il do like bulky writing and you can add like extra detail and you can do all the grammar :)

Xi Mo grabs the Heavenly Blood Ore, a Runic Talisman Paper, a Black Steel Ore and a Heavenly Gold Ore and brought them in front of him. He starts with the Runic Talisman Paper, using his Spiritual Essence to write the runes of a Storage Ring, which he has done many times back on the Martial World.

"Thinking".

enjoying the story so far,but I'd suggest a well structured power system to he used.not just jaming random stages without giving us the rankings.if the story had a good power systemwhich was explained from the start it would have been many times better.