Omega Office Worker - Reviews

Chi Wave Fire [LvL 8]The left sword can use its fire qi to create a wave of fire qi that burns everything in its way > Hell Fire Wave Chi [LvL 1]

[?]-"Whaaat! That actually worked! "

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Standing away from the group, Laura watched as Clint strapped his bow behind his back. Looking down at his wife, Clint said, "I'm gonna finish reflooring that sunroom as soon as I get back."

I'm sorry but the early chapters are in dire need of a rewrite. The quality is awful, the descriptions are simple, no punctuation, and grammar mistakes everywere. Reading ahead, the quality gets better. But as it stands, the early parts are way too painful to read.

I really love this book. it has a well written story, it has fun characters, it has an intriguing world building, it has Erotika moments, and finally it is just perfect.

Cant't Wait For Update ? ????Fire Emoji

The book is great!!! Please updated faster