Omae no neechan no ma〇Ko kimochiyo sugi. - Reviews

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{Second is perfect/eidetic/photographic memory}

The next day, the Yoda like teacher taught him the 'Dash Slash', it was essentially using a burst of speed to bat the foe further away, and create a more precise point of contact.

Maya walked into the room her grandma was waiting in.

"I think so too, though he had much better equipment than normal, still this does not add up. He is supposed to be weaker than the leader but for some reason, he is quite similar in strength." A young woman replied to the previous guy.

"Never gets old," Sami said to himself as he began to smirk.

"aku tak apa bi, tenang saja" kata yenni.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.

Brilliant dramatics! You truly kicked this story off in suspense, and it's greatly admired! Thank you for creating a wonderful realm of a story!

Perfect .. puurfect sweet puurfect revenge!!