An honest review from a fellow author.The Word building in the first ten chapters is enough to give the novel a solid foundation as they include ample clues about the setting being based around Roman mythology and martial cultivation with a strong revenge theme laying the groundwork for a villainous MC's rise to power.Evidence suggests that you're writing in Russian and translating to English either personality or with AI assistance. Part of chapter 4 is in Russian, and the mother's name switched languages once or twice. Careful with using AI tools, could affect contract considerations.Still rather readable overall. Translator for Super Gene 2 can't even keep genders straight.The premise is solid and I look forward to seeing where you take the story and how you flesh in the cultivation system as you mix Roman mythos with Chinese cultivation elements.+1 on the cat girl maid. The descriptions are good but could be a little less wordy at times. Paragraph length and spacing could use improvements. (To fit better with WN/LN style and platform) Ie. Mobile friendly.As that is how most readers access the platform. Still not that bad as is.
