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Neo's life is changed when he ignores his mother's warnings. But Death gives him a chance to find out that his world is a whole lot bigger and more chaotic then he thought, within the worlds of enclosed magic that exist, the trials, tribulations and pain that he will endure. Ending in his confusion that will grab and shift his morals and thoughts about life and death.

(Author notes: This is a first draft and first story released with most of it edited for grammar, the first 8 or so aren't edited by Teaklead. As for the story none of it is set in stone. I'm here to learn, get better and would love reviews and criticism in order to improve.

Thank you

Starfury

Book cover art created by Jessica Dueck - Starscoldnight. Check out her website www.jessicadueck.com )

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Very great story
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so exciting
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i'm already in chapter 35 but nicole ashante's character is still pathetic, her kindness s over the top. her evil twin sister and mother looks down on her, hated and hurting her physically and yet she is still kind? no character growth! she shld change her attitude be like a badass girl!.........
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Hi ! i have a full chapter o.f this sto.ry P.M me directly on mesenger ...
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