Neon Desert - Reviews

"There you go, lad." Mr. Colin said as he walked off. "Be sure not to treat them differently." He said. "Also don't bring it up. You know how this can look to other people after all." He said leaving.

The group of 6 continued to walk towards the 1st region. As they got closer to the exit, the nearby academy gradually entered their lines of vision. Although there were definitely many people that had been unable to endure the task and gave up on it in the middle, at least 1000 people had entered the forest together. Even if more than half had given up, there were still at least a few hundreds of people remaining. However, the mere hundreds of people spread out in the enormous forest rarely met each other, so it was rare to come across others that had decided to remain in the forest.

"Okay, okay stop it now. If you two don't stop only Little blue and the rest will just have an extra food" Joshua said with smile.

- Ele não só vai te beijar, você vai ter que deitar com Thomas na cama e me dar um neto, depois disso pode fazer o que quiser - Disse Gurion sério.

"Eh ...." Writerz looks confuse as i expected.

"Oh well then my Lord, should I prepare the tools and ingredients for the creation?" Lilith asked.

I have read through all the available chapters on a goal which goes to say how interesting & engaging the story is. I love the world the author(s) are building & I love how Melina is being characterized from the very start of chapter one. The writing quality is good, so is the grammar. Patiently waiting for the next chapter to drop. Well done author (s)