My second life in DC - Reviews

I am sorry but i am no longer ganna go on with this book. This is because i have a ton of school and work that i need to get done.

Nie Ming as a father should feel happy ofcourse  "Good good, hahahaha. That's should be celebrated" other congrats him except for nie lie that look little bit jealous  "How can brother, teach me!" Nie Li demand. Well that's natural, Nie Li is the big brother (though only few second different) he fell inferior to his little brother. Then Nie Lan responsed  "I have already told you before bro, you need to learn to write and read". Nie Li still confused "Write and read?". Nie Lan give a little bit explanations "Yes, we can't always expecting other people kindness to teach us willingly, remember what Nie Xiaofeng and Nie Xiaori said?". So then Nie Li recall, the moment that they were bullied by those two. Last time Nie Li can't take their bullying and hit Nie Xiaori on the face, it end up with them trying to beat Nie Li up more, but due to Nie Lan interference Nie Lan  take his place so because of that they start threatening them. "They ask their grandpa to not let other teach us" nie li said while remembering how his brother bedridden for a week.

Please don’t have the system have a smart*ss + b*tchy attitude. Seen too many already, and it’s just annoying in general. If MC does something stupid then it’s understandable, but throwing insults for no reason is just annoying

Thanks for the chapter!The grammar in this novel is not as bad as your other novels. Glad to see this improvement ???

She answered, it was correct.

She was having a dilemma!!

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

Pls add more capters. Can’t wait to read more.

      Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if you fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.   

well author does our mc gets a revenge arc