My Mister Ostrich - Reviews

"Um, Dad. No, I was distracted." I replied, shaking my head a bit even though I knew he couldn't see me.

SWIIISH—!

Summoning lv17

And all that glitters is gold

"Carl, come on, you don't want to be here forever right?"

I started reading this because it popped up on my recommendations when I was looking for something to read. Just because I like to read multiple books (so that I don’t end up reading all of the books at once.) This is actually really freaking good though?! Like, If you didn’t tell me you were new I probably wouldn’t have know. There are a few typos but that’s with every story, overall it’s easy to understand and the characters seem really interesting and easy to visualize. Kinda. I am in love with Erebyul(sorry if I butchered the name.) they sound hot but also they seem almost like a misunderstood villain lmao. I jokingly said “I can fix em” but I seriously like them so I’d love to read more. I just started reading it today and so far it’s great. (Started: 11:7:24)?

It's a fairly spicy book that I would recommend

What are your thoughts on the story's progression so far? Your comments would be very helpful and would guide me in identifying areas for further improvement.

I would really love for this novel to happen.  Its a phenomenal start and I'm sure it will not disappoint when it is completed, so please continue this work!