Can anyone recomend me this type of novel? Kingdom build with/out system with Male MC ofc. kindly tell me, thank you! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~===============================~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I would so love to rate this story as a 5, however there are some key issues that ruin this story for me.The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
loved the story too bad it has only 300 something chapters originally, this is just a cash grab at this point! 500 chapters is insane to stretch this story out just go to fan mŧļ to read it properly
