My K-Pop Dream - Reviews

"Second of all, you are in no position to say my winning streak is bad! Hmpf. Remember how you got forced out of control by that shitty brat? Yeah, taking control over a body which already contains a soul is quite the pain, right? I should know."

Pants: Leather pants (Deff: +5)

"And why not this year, too? You never know, this could suddenly be our last summer together."

Ayah : "nak, sayang kamu dimana?"

Their relationship had finally reached a stable phase, which by no means was easy to achieve. Normally a couple would take a few weeks or even months to attain this. However, since this particular couple spent their whole days and nights together, this process sped up significantly.

Turning, he saw that Pietro and Wanda had entered the room. Looking to the Maximoff brother, Ultron answered his question, "To be alive."

a good and improving story ,really underrated

It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read.Things to improve:Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader.Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public.All in all, keep the good work

I can tell that this is a slow burn kind of story. Not a fan but it isn't bad. From what I've read, at least the world doesn't revolve around the MC. Decent story overall. NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS.

Very catchy, the pacing is just right and I love the characters personalities! The plot itself is interesting so I'd love to see more.