This book needs to be proofread BADLY. There are so many grammatical issues that I couldn't keep reading. Also it is repetitive, like actually having the same sections repeated.
I just want to say you did so good on this book I understand this is your first book and there were some grammar issues but over all it’s a really good story I’m on chapter 81 so I’m almost finished with it I can’t wait to read the second book next…
