Mute Girl The Series : Rose Thorns - Reviews

You'll never know if you don't go

wanted to write a comment for why you stopped the divine hunter buh I've used up my reply slot. That book is great pls continue the hardwork??

ummm...I think you need to put the quotation marks at the dialogue to make it become clearer, and also...try to make the story a show rather then a tell, if you can... but overall, it's the writing the problem, if you managed to correct it, then it will be improved.