Mr. CEO, Please Marry My Mommy - Reviews

I love all of Muse’s books! This one was a really good read.

I loved this book. So sad it’s ended. You truly are an amazing writer

The story is really great, and it keeps you on your toes from beginning to end. Love the characters' growth and development, and not just the main characters. And the chemistry between Lila and Dane is off the charts!

Around chapter 470, it’s like the author changed. The way the novel is written changed, at least, if not the wholeass author.  All of a sudden the MC’s personality goes from cool cucumber to a two-bit comedian that never knows what’s going on. It’s like his stats dropped Int by 20% and shot for +20% Char, but ended with a whole new stat called Dipshit.Then a bit later on, is a full “chapter” and a half of musician banging when every other time in the novel it was a couple of nondescript sentences. Way different in style, out of nowhere.

The MC is a doormat. She is literally like a dog who sits and waits for someone to command her on what she should or shouldn't do. She apologizes to everyone and everything.

I don't understand why stupid fucking Authors think this sort of character has any sort of appeal. What the author is trying to do is just give the mc the moral high ground. Why? For no reason. She doesn't even need to stand on a moral high ground.

Don't read it. This is like all other novels/mangas out there.
This is a waste of time.

is it good?
well even i hate bringing all that things (countries ) in a novel i mean this is a novel y would u say korea suck or china or japan sucks

I continued reading this and had no regrets

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One of best trial read. Already updated in mtl and still enjoying this novel. ....... ..     ...........................................................m..mm........

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Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever read a novel that has such little idea about what it wants to do and be, and what the basic laws of how the world should function are, just for example it almost immediatly says if you die in the game you cant revive thats your one chance but like 2 chapters later you can revive just you have to restart, If your trashy like me youll probably still somewhat enjoy it but man are the inconsistencies annoying.

Hmm..I like the story, but when 20 chapters are spent on 1 game and MC turns from poor and weak to rich and OP in a 20 minutes game..Then you spend 30 chapters on another game where 5 chapters are spent talking about 3 sniper shots and how the MC had a sudden personality change halfway through..There started to be some gammar mistakes happening 30+ chapters in..Now the MOST annoying thing about this book.. This is EVERYWHERE;'Amazing', 'Truly Amazing', 'Absolutely Amazing''Scary', 'Truly Scary''Cool', 'So Cool', 'Really Cool''Regret', 'Regret so Much', 'Too much Regret''Thrilling', 'Too Thrilling', 'Wonderful Thrill''Lost?', 'Lost', 'Actually Lost''Crushed', 'Truly Crushed', 'Absolutely Crushed''Quiet', 'Silent', 'Dead Silent''Stiff', 'Incredibly Stiff''Smug', 'Really Smug', 'Too Smug''Pretentious', 'Too Pretentious''Crazy', 'Too Crazy''Kill', 'Kill You', 'Gonna Kill', 'Killing', 'Say Kill, Will Kill''Too Strong', 'Too Manly', 'Too Domineering''Incredible', 'Too Incredible'And Many More.. (some paragraghs are just complete Copy&Paste)THEY ARE REPEATED EVERY CHAPTER!!