Moment At The Beach. - Reviews

Look, I hate writing.

It was jumbled but there is a strong image that keeps appearing.

"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.

The overall story is going  on a good track its just like how people watch kdramas but it need to be updated everyday. Overall great work .For all the future readers you need to be patient its a great story  which will develop  eventually.