Mending Lucas Heart | Azelea Avery - Reviews

Love the story!!

Versatile superstar: Rise in Hollywood has a very good Hollywood vibes, and the author uses a lot of real life movies to show the greatness of the MC. (e.g. Batman dark night)

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World: Basically he uses the resources and knowledge from another world to build an empire.

ahhhhhh frigging release something darn it

I wasn't expecting much when I started this story, and I was right... For the climax battle at least. The epilogue and every other part except the very start of the story was very satisfying to read. My only regret was that there isn't a more detailed ending to the Heroes, the rushed ending and the lack of development of the later summoned heroes.

5 stars if the author can continue this novel without delay...great deal right..??.. .....…... ............................. ................. .

Title of this novel should be "Another unbalanced MMORPG: Dumb luck specialist". MC is lucky dumbass. He played underpowered class for a month staying at level 1. Then he got ultra lucky mining drop that turned him into OP character (cause you know game balance is a ****). He had 0 contact with other players, knows 0 information about his class and is without his main class weapon (puppet) even though everyone had one. But somehow he is expert player??? Then character development... Except for playing the game he may be ficus for all we know. And considering style i doubt that he will develop later. Worldbuilding... except badly designed game, we know absolutely nothing about RL. Also you get info dump about game here and there.Overall badly written novel. There are much better quality written game novels out there.

Overall great but with a few flawswriting quality-Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good.Stability-For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back...story development-Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still.Character design-Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger.But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone.Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family  (pure speculation)World Background-Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge.Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.

What a shameless self-review............... But what I can I do, I love my own work..............I want to see how far my work can go...................

This is basically the best novel out of the trial read on now and it's got thr worst reviews. So what if it's a copy, many other copies got good reviews

Not horrible, but also not amazing.Sentence structure is a bit jarring to read, and the statement pacing is strange. My main issue is the lack of knowledge as to how Esports works, though. It's very clear to me that the knowledge on the operation of an esports team and the players practicing habits, plus the coach, that the writer does not have any experience in the esports scene. The display of a very rudimentary and romanticized version of esports is very prevalent in this novel, and detracts greatly from the experience.

Nice story it goes with the flow. The characters and everything is cool. Its like watching somebody narrating his entire life.i most seriously have nothing else to say.

About the synopsis of Chinese original，here is general meaning：As his name is，Hao ren is a good  guy.   as a small landlord，he just desires to have a peaceful life. actually he had did it  until here came two ladies , so beautiful and mysterious ....A old villa，a group of mysterious creatures and a labor contract from "God" made Hao ren become the busiest nanny and the most magical landlord in the world."Since the day I signed the contract with "God"， I've been on a  fucking pirate ship" Hao ren said ......(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡very interesting story，just enjoy it..