The first chapter was intriguing. The way u convey how the MC was being bullied.. his expression and thought about it was on point. And I liked the fact that you added mystery in every chapter making people guessing what is this? Why? It makes me scroll to the next and the next until I ended up reading to the last chapter ... damn you made me lose time on writing my story. LOLOverall, despite ur confusing me, I still read it. So I'm giving you a full 5 star. Because U managed to magic ur way to my curiosity.