Marry Me, Madison - Reviews

???: "I'm Moegi the sexiest kuniochi in Konoha."

You can choose farmer, fruit grower, hunter, blacksmith and many other

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

His hands were under my chin, pulling up the cover, tucking it around me.

hello guys author here. if you read it I really appreciate. its's my first time writing something like this especially its's really hard for me to write on language which isn't my native. please give me your feedbacks. you can ask me here everything you don't understand, and thank you for your attention.

Nice! It’s superb! I’m really enjoying its thrilling world of the mafia—full of intrigue and excitement! In love with mafia, action, espionage, crime. Then start reading this novel. It has its ups and down but it's worth it in those categories( mafia, action, espionage, crime)

I'm still reading some chapters and I have to be honest when I say I'm enjoying myself so far. I don't know about anyone else, but this book is fire ?? Keep the chapters coming ?

What happend, Why did the chapter get removed?!

It shows promise. The story has a good foundation so far. The main issues I have with it are that multiple paragraphs are frequently repeated copy-paste right next to eachother or at the start of a new chapter, and that in my opinion there is a lot of focus on earth, despite it being essentially ants compared to the void fleet. I get the whole make a good impression on the people of earth and stuff, but I feel like it doesn’t need as many chapters (that’s personal opinion, others may feel differently)

The book is writing really well. The characters have a distinct personality and the world is introduced at a good pace. Although there can be improvement in writing quality, everything else is done really well. Highly recommend!

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further