Mana Whisperer - Reviews

Then I held her hand and made her sit beside me.

Great story, nice flow and detailed well thought out characters, I am still wondering why the author doesn't want to go premium but it's good to build a fan base first and this tale will get it. Keep on writing! As an invested reader I will keep waiting for the next chapter! ?

The grammar is great, the story is well written, you end up imagining as you read. the start was intriguing and amazing, I recommend the story to any of you