Mahou no Ko - Reviews

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Mr. Charles clearly unsatisfied by how things progressed, still followed affirmatively and asked "General, How will they arrive and do we require to provide them any assistance with any military hardware.

"Wow, so strong" - said Arthur surprised.

"Sir, we can't let you face them alone. Not for us."

He listened immediately throwing himself to the ground, an action that saved his life as a sword passed right through the spot that Okuyasu's torso was a second ago. The scariest part is that there was no killing intent on the attack, it was just like there was no emotion to be felt when you cut grass for Bao. It was all a mission after all.

At last, he let go. Both of them stared at each other after that for a while. Then, she walked slowly to the supreme one. When she looked back, she saw that the villagers gathered around them.

was enjoying it until the time travel part , sad to drop this ....

one of the best story, to put it simple I read many Indian story and there are only handful which are good and this is one of them the story flow is good and the type story turn is epic not to forgot about 2 system for level of India base its awsome

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Another book :3 Feel free to use this review for any questions you might have. Criticism is appreciated, obviously. Enjoy the read and feel free to comment on any mistakes or inconsistencies you might find, I'll fix them asap.

Fascinating read, writer seems to be following the classic route for the whole revenge - reactivated path for web novels, the setting is refreshing and the text is so elegant! Plot could be better and the tempo is a bit slow though