Machines and Magic Empire! - Reviews

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Just found this, completely read it and enjoyed it. In case you continue to write this, this will stay in my Library~Thank you, imma go see if you wrote some more fanfics. :3

"Oh, I did?" Nadran asked, surprised.  [Oh yeah, weren't there rewards for setting records?]

"Yup."

but Kate laugh

"But not about the marital obligation?"

58. Cerita Humor Tergokil: Beda Keyakinan

I think the story line will be great ?Please keep updating it am rooting for you????????

I would like to say it is Excellent & best for some beginner writing such amazing Novel, And the starting 4 chapters Nailed It..Keep It Up, Alex. I Will give it a 5.

The title and description of the book dont correlate at all

I was first loosing interst when i was reading chapter one but i was later hooked, didn't know why but i too was getting angry as i was reading it especially chapter 8?? all in all the story line is quite ok hope you keep onthe good work