Loving the Mafia Boss - Reviews

Love the story!! More Novel’s to come Author

Love the story!! More Novel’s to come Author!! ......

Wow ... love it

Enjoyed it!!!

not sure but it should be back in a day or two.

For some reason reading it feels a bit all over the place, can't figure when a scene starts or ends and environment feels vaguely explained, feels like things just happening from one point to another without journey and explanation

Honestly, I'm really annoyed with Ren misunderstanding Isodel's feelings and how the guy just seems to always blush and become dumb when talking with Evie. Author didn't even explain how he started liking her, in the beginning, it was just explained that he wanted to make up for ruining her life in the past life and nothing about then even knowing each other in the past and it's even worse in the present. So how in the fuck did these stupid feelings come up????? Honestly I like the MCs cold, calculating but friendly character, but I draw the line at stupid forced relationship like this! I would rather it was harem or non-romance than this shit!

Are the O's the one chasing our handsome Omega? Not the Alpha? This is new (for me)

interesting concept and fun characters. character consistency could use a little work and the further along it gets stuff doesn't align. needs work but could be a great story. very different than others.