(Hiatus)Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic

I really do not know what to say about this story.  It does not seem to be outstanding so far, but conversely it does not seem to be bad either.  It is really too early to tell with 20 chapters.  For me this one is a wait and see situation.

I actually really enjoyed these twenty chapters of trail read, I mean normally with a system like his the MC would would do one thing or another to showoff ( attentional or not ) while these give off a mt slice of life feel where the Mc is not absorbed into the system and uses it more like a passing moment. I especially like the way the author writes the character thoughts even side character you hear thoughts behind their actions  making it feel less that things are happening just to happen

This novel is my favorite by far and never fails to put a smile on my face with how silly it can be. However, when push comes to shove it can really hit you with the feels. The author lulled me into a false sense of security with the lighthearted comedy but as things develop I become increasingly worried that things will end in tragedy. But without stakes and a realistic possibility of loss how can you truley have a tense situation.

I enjoyed each chapter, it is easy to digest and also the sequence between one chapter and the next does not leave you feeling lost.  In addition, the plot is captivating, it motivates you to continue reading and wanting to discover what awaits you in the next chapter.

looking fun so far.just created an account so I could comment. probs the most descriptive LN i've read (still new to the concept of LN)looking forward to more stuff man!

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