Loop of Time - Reviews

He's glad that nothing major happened to his body. Imagining something horrifying happening to his body, like an extra arm coming out, his face transforming into something terrifying and disgusting, imagining all of that, he started to shivers, praying that nothing like that will never happen to him.

"You still need to take a bath and wash up before bed." Professor Zhang urged her.

He makes me feel... complete... I'm not familiar with this feeling, it's a little overprotective, a little - okay, a lot - flustered-ness, a bit of embarrassment; it makes me nervous and excited at the same time; it makes me feel like I can fly but it also makes me sink back down from nerves; it's confusing and it makes me feel complete; it's annoying but... I like it for some reason!

He yells the first part in vigor, while whispers in the end. He looks like he's a kid forced to eat broccoli with his constipated look. Do I look like a devil that much?

"dari mana kau dapat kekuatan sebesar itu?" aku bertanya dengan vanesa

January 24, 1941

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Yes, somewhere deep in my soul."

Author everything is chief kiss the story is unique the power system is good  I can’t find a one thing wrong about this novel except cam you show us the appearance of the characters it’s getting hard to imagine the Mc and your cover is not really pleasing to the eye. Everything else is perfect I need more chapters ?

Yesss sirrrr, Hopefully non of you get too addicted to my novel

it is a very good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it

IT was really good until the Point where you got us into the water Story Just write Like a short chapter or something Like that that would have even cool other than that ther IS only the system write IT maybe in Like [ hi i am the system ] in this Kind of stuff but IT a pretty good Story until now