Please, don't forget to rate and leave a comment on my new ongoing book. If you want to read a completed one, you can my other book, Lucky I'm in Love with my Best Friend. Thank you.
I like the story up until you made the female lead pathetic and needy and your story line has come to a grinding halt and not moving forward, I’m trying to work out what’s the point of your story, just the female lead looking pathetic
