The rewrite of a previously posted Loiterous with much more detail and much less wish-fulfillment.
A shady young businessman, Jeremy Grand, decides to play the latest Virtual Reality MMO - Loiterous. Watch as he advances in the game and tries to keep both worlds and his often conflicting identities apart.
You can find the older version of the chapters on my blog below.
https://loiterous.wordpress.com/
Currently on HIATUS.
