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One day Set a young teen was masturbating in his home after school while his family was away. While masturbating he did not notice the break in that was going on, so when one of the intruders heard grunts from the secound floor, he went to investigate. When he found the source of the grunts, he slowly opens the door, but he was so shocked at what he saw that he could not dodge the millions of kids that fortunately hit his face( I heard its good for the skin) Being the untrained robber that he is, he pulls out the gun at his side and shoots the shooter, and Set being the lazy teenager that he is got shot.

Umm this is my first novel so criticism is welcome and have fun.

I will be writing this novel by putting in whatever comes from my imagination so things will be kinda weird, if your not weirder than me.

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