Let's Go Anywhere: The Journal of two Idiots - Reviews

He wasn't a real soul. No, that's not it.

"I will make sure that you will beg for me. "

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.

its my 1st time writing a webnovel is there any mistake please point out ?