Lei Tai

English barrier makes it a difficult read. Plus there is a lot of run on about absolutely nothing.

I just love everything about this story the grammar the author used is so beautiful it makes u feel like ur Ash and they used First and Third person narrative so well it like i was in the story absolutely amazing i wiuld recommend this story to everyone

Very nice story well written kudos to the author

it was short need more content.

Wow, what a great story! It grabs the attention from the first chapter. Well done, author, and thank you for exposing us to this beautiful world of magic, mythical creatures, and unconditional love!