First, props for the author. I don't have the talent or courage to write and publicize a novel.So far, the story has two flagrant problems for me. First, considering that the MC is pure OP, he have the awareness of a blind bull. Seriously, perception of the enemies and enviroment are of extreme importance to any warrior.In this way, the MC is quite stupid, he don't have any long term objetive, just kill, money, being OP in front of others, while playing as pawn in other's games.The writing and world building are good.Sorry about the rant, but I like the concept and want to continue reading.