as i read this before and after some of you, in my honest opinion this story is one of the best I've read... and I've read a lot of stories.i love that there is good story telling. I love that the spelling is good. and I don't have to guess at the words either. I love this story already and am hanging on every single chapter. the pacing is good. and the detail is also good and doesn't drown you in the scenery. the world background is also good. and i love the characters already each one unique in there own way. if this story is updated persistently I'd be incredibly happy with it. please keep going as this is a work of art.