King Of The Farm - Reviews

"Ellaine 10 sets" I said and Ellaine started to look for clothes.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

He had sounded so excited on the phone. he picked her up that evening and she had never forgotten that night! she gave herself to him unreservedly and they were at it for most of the night.

I really like the pacing of the story, not too fast and not too slow. First person P.O.V. is really great. Love the characters' names also. El and Ci's friendship was fun.

The Cliffhanger!Oh my god, the ending! The masked figure showing up with a gun completely flipped the atmosphere of the chapter. You’ve managed to leave me with so many questions: Who is this new player? What do they want with Skylar and the others? The last line where the masked figure singles out Jasper just adds another layer of mystery. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!

Good start, I hope it takes off and continue.I love how the chapters are titled btw:)

The synopsis got me excited and character are good too. Good work author?

I will give myself 5 stars, because I think my novel has that potential.