Just a passing goddess, don't mind me. - Reviews

Just a passing goddess, don't mind me.
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"Oh okay, thats pretty clear."
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stabilize the foundation , literally its just a story about stabilizing your foundation so God forbades if the author could use another way in pacing the novel but why not use the same lame excuse over and over
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Shameless review time. So, my book's awesome. And I'll tell you why. My writing quality is pretty good, errors are pretty hard to come by and my vocab is fairly varied. And overall, my sentences flow naturally and words are used in ways that suit their connotations. My use of punctuation is good but I don't tend to use colons or semi colons, not that I think anyone actually cares though lolStory development isn't something I'll talk too in depth about, but, my pacing is on the slightly faster end sometimes but that's about it.Character design, so I think the way I've made character's different to what most would do, but I don't wanna spoil so shoo and read the novel. But, in terms of characterisation, it's pretty good except I'm not sure if I want to tie philosophical themes into characters yet since that takes brain power and knowledge (was planning on making a hedonistic or egoistic character but I need to think a lil bit for that)Update stability, so, I post daily atm but I can and will take rests when I need them, so I don't burn out.World background. So, I think I'm really good at this, a lot of authors just vomit info all over you. But, I prefer to only bring up info when it's relevant, since it's easier to remember and digest that way and leaves a little bit of thinking for you to do.
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I have a nice feeling about the book. Quite interesting. please  continue to update the book, author. ?
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I don't know how to rate this right now because there is only one chapter but that one, chapter is fantastic! I can already tell by just that one chapter this story could be great! Kinda sad that the author gave up on it so soon but I hope they pick it back up! Also if you continue with this can you make it so when MC gets out of the ground he with find a spatial ring or rings with lots of amazing stuff in it/them? Or he finds a lot of heaven defying treasures? Or both? That's just a suggestion thought,you don't have to do that.
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Love the story, the elements on it, and the immersive writing.

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