I will start with what I dislike about the novel.1st - the switch between view points - I think instead of using 1st on supporting characters, it should move to third, so we can have an insight on what the other person is thinking.2nd - Too info-bumps, I forgot all the locations in chapter 3, and I think it first the volume zero category. 3rd - Clara is forgotten. What I like.The first kiss is well done.The pacing is good at my level, although slow on most parts.The update stability shows that the author is passionate about his book, and the possibility of him not dropping it is high.????
