Isekai Dungeon no Bonus Point - Reviews

Jadi ketika Zelretch muda dan seorang lelaki tampan yang tidak dikenal muncul di dekat lokasi berdiri Issei sebelumnya, kerumunan di sekitarnya waspada.

His brother Dakon saw the book and gave it a read, Dakon wasn't much better at reading than Ziro but he still could read fairly well since his mother used to be a teacher before moving to the farm to become a stay at home mother. Dakon read about the legendary warrior whose strength in swordsmanship was unparalleled, reading more into it seeing what Ziro had been intrigued so much by in this book that he had been reading it every day.

Setelah El yakin bahwa ini bukan dunianya, ia meminta Old Sun untuk menjelaskan lebih detail tentang dunia ini dan meminta izin untuk menumpang sementara dan Old sun menerima dengan antusias sangat, merupakan akal sehat untuk membalas budi terlebih lagi merupakan kebanggan tersendiri jika tempatnya di singgahi orang yang sangat kuat.

Everyone watched as I first drank and then the Zaiokor drank as well. His eyes went wide, his back straighten and in seconds he looked ten years younger, the sharps in his eyes became clearer and his presence even more so.

fall there, did it begin to talk to them.

She smiled apologetically with Vincent.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

You'll never know if you don't go

"You mutilated them, you put their heads in their stomachs !?"

Duplicate of an existing novel called ‘Surgery Godfather’ here on the app

The story itself is a good story, overall quality is great, so don't get me wrong with what I'm about to say. The writing style is infuriating. Just to get that "ohh" reaction out of the reader, the author will leave out information that is explained sometimes in the same chapter or even worse just to seem like the MC or sometimes the other points of view are acting. For example if you read chapter 29-37 you will understand what I mean. This style of writing is pervasive throughout the novel. If I wasn't somewhat invested in the story I would have dropped it.

An intriguing story you got here. However, the chapters were a bit short, don't you think? Anyways, its a great story, hoping to read more from it. Keep it up.