Immortal Spirtit(Bleached Immortal) - Reviews

My finger finally felt the feeling of being surrounded by warmth, an unprecedented feeling. I almost came, luckily I managed to resist.

Thanks for the Chap! Author-sanCan't wait for the next one :)

"Oh. I will give it to you in a few days. I promise."

Marissa: " ya sure whatever"  ( kissing her boyfriend)

After a while, Allen finally managed to hit all of their dantian as he continued to swept once again. He deactivated Low Engage as he looked at the people fall to the ground, writhing in pain.

Intersting MC power idea, but a SEVERE lack of creativity here. It only took me about half a chapter to figure out the "Japanese Cartoon" this series is based off. and the similarities do not end but instead increase. If you're going to base your world off a pre-existing fictional world you need to put your own unique twist to it, and I'm sorry to say that is completely absent here.

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I guess Alsiel will the comic relief of the group?! I like him already! I like his humor and I kinda imagine his appearance similar to Phileo.