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Yuki, a feminine young man, moves to America after his father remarries. Follow Yuki as he explores the new Virtual Reality game called 'Second Start Online'. Will Yuki be able to become more manly or will he suffer the same fate as he does in reality?

This will be my first ever story that I write, hopefully everyone will give me great criticism and help me develop my writing skills.

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Imma put it on pause, chap 980. -this book had the potential to be 5 stars. The author strong points are :making likeable characters, balanced power scale and overall interesting powers, very good humor(plot kinda basic and linear tho). The characters are so well written and interesting that mc isn’t even top 3. - why is this the biggest fumble in the history of novels? Author randomly decides to adopt a “system” even tough he is perfectly capable to write and doesn’t need any crutch to progress his novel, in fact, the system messes up the whole story and adds tens of gigantic plot holes that leave a bad aftertaste while reading it. Its literally self sabotaging, actually wicked work on his part. -also the romance is unfortunately bad… yeah ik its a slow burn and shi, but slow burn has to make sense, u cant progress one chap and then the next one ur back to square one. I feel like bro added romance only so he could fit a few more snarky jokes in.
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I was gonna say that. I can't unsee it anymore
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Im curious is mc op or just smart?
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My dear author... please update
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please continue working on the book.
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this is a good book
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