I reject you, Mr. Alpha - Reviews

Amazing book. captivating and educative. I will recommend it any day

super story

Awesome book awesome author

yes i know, i wrote it in my comment

Dense protag? G*dd*mn :c

Novel progress way too slow
Adding too much unnecessary information until it took 2 f*ck*ng chaps just to explain sh*t
Even side character get chapters of themselves which is infuriating
Mc is stupid,I mean wasn't it better to just solo but he had to bring party, especially that gut Leone I think,he's soo annoying and slowing down mc progress and this novel too
I haven't read until 100 chaps and Im giving up.that how bad it is

I didn't know how delusional QQ is. YY stole your father's love? She couldn't steal something she never had.Beautiful dresses, house? It belongs to YY mother, not that bastard and dresses and princess room are from YY grandfather- two people you don't have anything in common with. (Two people who don't even want to know that you exist). My guess is: if YY was not there, her mother wouldn't tolerate that so called husband and his bastard child, she'd divorce him and kick them out. So if there wasn't YY, QQ wouldn't be there either.

not really, putting his life to save someone he love is not dumb. dumb is risking his life for "chance" while ignoring everyone and his own safety.
what i was talking was about "reason" and "justification" risking his life for saving his lover is okay, risking his life for one in a tenth chance to get legendary sword is dumb

The author likes to skips scenes that occur and then mention them in the past on the next chapter. Even when it is the protag involved. So far it’s good other than that, 115 in.

Glad there's an update here, since it's been quite awhile, several weeks, if not months. I have forgotten much of this story. What a shame.Hope all is well for you if some misfortune prevented you from updating this story; if not, then not sure what to say but what a real shame if yr disinterested.

the main character is the weakest character ever written. in fact there are not many likable characters and the writing is almost childish

Great story line. Grammar is not that good.