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"Kau bisa sakit." suaranya terdengar cemas. Ia sudah kembali berdiri disampingku.

"Well, the teleportation worked smoothly. I actually had to modify the portal at the other end so that, evil beings like Cthulhu couldn't access the portal to gain entry to this dimension, otherwise, it would be a disaster and also I was confident in your ability to keep the Granger family safe." Harold explained.

kami pun menikmati pesta ini sambil  menyapa semua tamu yang datang, setelah selesai pesta jam 00:14 , sekarang tinggal kami ber 5 di halaman dan bersantai, dan ada beberapa pelayan, aku pun menyuruh mereka beristirahat,

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

"Hmm? He's been with since last night"

"Hey, Laura." Naruto greeted with a small smile, returning the hug, "How's the baby?"

I really like your novel. I would like to request permission from you, the owner of this novel, to have this novel translated into my language or not.

The story has a lot of potential !!!keep it going Author !!!!

I thought to myself, what's an idea that's would be very unique and not similar to the popular webnovel tropes we have out there And I decided on this ideaI was skeptical about it at first since I wasn't sure what the reception would be but I'm blown away by how much support it has had so farI sincerely hope you enjoy it

honestly as for this story it's ridiculously slow paced and Author already trying to make privilege chapters to a story that has gone nowhere yet not to mention author is a big flake wants to charge privilege on other novel at 30 chapters but will write 10 if that and disappear. I do like the Strongest Mage story and characters even overlook the countless errors in every area from characters background changes to simple math. I don't know why web novel doesn't drop down the privilege # when author doesn't produce and I'd suggest not starting a new novel by this author when he is extremely flaky on his main one besides the fact this novel feels like it will take 200 chapters to feel like it's gone anywhere sad but true. Little advice never buy privilege from this author unless you have 30 chapters unread to actually make it worth it don't expect 30 chapters to be written happy reading everyone ?