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What will happen if the child is not from the royal family and has more than one power? Well, the chance of that is very rare, only one in a billion. Many think that this is not possible at all.

Yu Yan was asked by the lady in charge of the orphanage, Madam Yin, to find all the children and gather them up for dinner. She gathered most of them, but realised almost half of the children were missing, including her sister, Yu Xiao. She looked around thinking of where they might be and realised she hadn't checked in the garden. She quickly walked towards the garden and heard shouting. She rushed over to see what all the commotion was about and saw her younger sister lying in the floor.

"After this, I can finally go back.."

"Yeah, but I don't remember it."

"You know," Xenovia said now, "for the fact that such famous people had been part of their organization, I am surprised that I have never heard of him. I mean, he is your leader, isn´t he?"

Neha: 'I'm not going to.'?

Sorry for dropping this reviewbut sorry if there are grammar errors and other issues with this bookI'll do well to improve moreand please corrections are allowed for improvement

quick question how did you get 34k views in just 10 chapters because I have been writing stories too but no one has even commented

Really good read so far! The thing that stands out most for me in this book is the dialogue. The character designs are nice and all, but the dialogue is really fleshing out our characters, like Soujin, who is surprisingly spirited and driven and a little snarky, or Muffet, who threw me for a loop with her whole 'interaction' with Captain Blackhart. You get a feel of the fact that these characters are more than meets the eye.The action is good so far and I appreciate the immediate dive into Sword Magic and Mystcry. I hope the fact that Soujin is starting as a Captain won't hamper how we perceive power progression in the story (if that is something the author intends to explore).All in all great read

Lol why does this novel have the Harem tag and No-Harem tag at the same time.