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As they were summoned, the old king in front of them said to the "Young heroes, I have summoned you here to fulfill a great prophecy, you have to defeat a coming evil, foretold by the by our High Priest, Ursum."

The heroes, as observed by the king, looked around the room, and said out loud "Where are we?"

"You are in the great kingdom of Vo-". Unfortunatley the king stopped before he could end the sentence.

There was a dagger sticking out of his skull...

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This is my first story, constructive critism is appreciated and wanted.

So please, help me, I am drowning in a thing called incompetence.

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