Hunting Immortals

Really did like this novel. I loved the two main characters and how they got along, made me laugh ai much. Loved the chemistry. Good job.

Your vocabulary is great and your storyline is gripping, good work

The bird flew over to the window, but instead of passing through, it stopped to perch on the window ledge, and looked at Lavender expectantly. En guessed what the bird wanted, and held out her hand. The bird placed the apple stalk onto her palm, but now it was tied into an intricate knot.