How i delete this? - Reviews

I apologise, but I'll start with this. How about a novel where wits and brain have value? And what if 'system' existence is not only explained, but also it's limitations are shown?! Oh, and how about MC not being the 'chosen one' and more of a lab rat in greater being game? What if his grand schemes and plans have some flaws, so he can lose and LEARN from it? Great isn't it? Now to the long one. I'll try to do it without spoilers.Writing quality is good, not perfect (there were some insignificant typos), but hey, nothing is. It's easy to read and writing gives characters their own flavour. Speaking of character design, it's good enough. Main and notable characters are quite interesting to watch. They have their own arcs and don't do things that contradicts what they did so far for the sake of plot development. Less significant ones are not as bland as typical 'young masters' which is good enough for fillers. World building is great and is shown slowly as MC gets more and more (it's a good way, because we as well as MC don't know anything about the world, so other characters can explain to him stuff that also explain it to readers) story develops. The world or worlds to be more correct are a gargantuan part to explore as it should be if you use terms as demi-gods or plains. But this novel in terms of giving that small fly in gigantic world vibe is one of the best so far (maybe one Warlock drinking tea in abyss can argue). So, overall with this rarely seen in novels concept of battle of wits, huge and vibrant world (that does not change just because) to explore with interesting developments so far the novel does the trick.

I've only read chapter one so far and I'm pretty excited for the rest. The concept is a very good one and I want to see how this will unfold. There aren't many if any, female mc, better yet a female fox girl mc (personally I prefer a fox mommy cough cough) in an apocalyptic setting, so this is a kind of rare find.That's all I have to say so far. Keep up the good work, Shoomshoom. <3

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love this book  so funny and cute. Read it!

"We've recovered enough." Lily spoke out but Simon flicked her forehead.

"I am Ruth Rosencast, slave of the house Mytistria, kitchen scrubber, and a magus of the first degree." Doing a curtsey with the rags she was wearing, I couldn't help but let out a chuckle as well. Both of us were now looking at the parchment. A plan started assembling itself in my head as the dark print of the Circle's symbol stared back furiously.

One way is shorter and leads to the neck connecting with the necks black part while one is longer and goes across the arm and elbow towards the wrist where it circles around it like the ankle and like Frieza has crystals on his forearms but a red color

[Oh, I guess what I did was pretty impressive, then,] Nadran thought with faint surprise.  "Cool," he responded calmly.  Even if it was something difficult to accomplish, he knew that he was just at the beginning of his journey.  No matter how striking his performance was in a nonlethal challenge, it was meaningless if he was killed by someone stronger.  Potential was just that; potential.  In this cruel world, countless geniuses were crushed before they could truly shine.  To Nadran, this challenge was just a method to improve his strength.  If he were to truly compare himself to others, it would only distract and discourage him.  After all, there were countless cultivators that were far stronger than him, and simultaneously several years younger.  Even if he progressed twice as fast as others, it would still be nearly a decade before he could catch up with the real geniuses.

Feelingero ang lalaki. Asar! Akala mo naman ang sarap ng katawan nya!

Surely a chitchat huh? Thank you author for the update

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"Hey… how are you feeling?"